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Acrostic - Relationships

A small dedication to my Mother and Father.I chose to write this poem in Double Acrostic so that my little poem will have both at the beginning and ending the same letter and meaning  giving the sense that we children of our parents comes in between the two pillars(parents) of their life.And we are protected within them safe and sound guarding us from all hurts. I am thankful to them for what I am today.


MOTHER
Mother a living embleM
Organises her kids to dO
Their works with minimum efforT
Having them learn what is wortH
Enlightening them with care and hopE
Rising the young hearts with unconditional love and cheeR

FATHER
Filling his little one's mind full oF
Adventure, he is the perfect papA
Teaching them what is besT
Hunting with them in areas higH
Engaging them in the real life gamE
Recognizing their talent to make a successful carreeR

And a dedication to my beloved daughter on her Birthday 11/10 today 'Monday'

DAUGHTER
My Daughter's birthday
its  A celebration
for Us all
to Give and receive
happy Hugs of love
and Toys she loves
to Enjoy playing
a Rejoiceful day

Why leave my son,here for you my little one (05/11)

SON
My Son smiling
thinking Of his coming
birthday Nearing very soon

Did you see the way I wrote the above two poems for my children.Guessed right.Yes,In between the Two pillars called Mother and Father :)..another form of Acrostic , middle or complex form of Acrostic

23 Responses to “Acrostic - Relationships”

Saras said...
Monday, October 11, 2010

Exquisite Acrostics, beautifully written. Very original and packed with Love!


umapoems said...
Monday, October 11, 2010

@Saras..Thanks a lot! :)


Mary said...
Monday, October 11, 2010

I admire your skill in acrostics. They are beautiful and loving, and I would think they were both difficult and enjoyable to write!


Jingle said...
Monday, October 11, 2010

This is very challenging, you made it cool!
beautiful pieces.


Shail Raghuvanshi said...
Monday, October 11, 2010

Beautiful. Keep writing. We need more good poets out here.

Best,
Shail


umapoems said...
Monday, October 11, 2010

@ Thanks for your valuable comments.I love to play with poems.They are my passion !


Sherry Blue Sky said...
Monday, October 11, 2010

Cleverly done.


Dasuntoucha said...
Monday, October 11, 2010

What a wonderful tribute to your family...enjoyed reading this.


Eileen T O'Neill ..... said...
Monday, October 11, 2010

umapoems,
A very different style. I enjoyed reading this poem very much indeed.

Best wishes,
Eileen


kathew said...
Monday, October 11, 2010

I like how you "play with poems"...I am just learning and I learn a lot from all you pros!
Great tribute to your family!


cheerupalways said...
Tuesday, October 12, 2010

nice effort....
wonderful words.


A Restless Mind With A Sensitive Heart! said...
Wednesday, October 13, 2010

Hey Uma! how do write this?! juggling with letters and words.

A nice expression for your family. Lovely blog too... will be coming back. am following u dear!

RESTLESS


umapoems said...
Wednesday, October 13, 2010

@ all Thanks for the comments1
@ restless mind...As I have said before I have a passion for poems ,and maybe that makes me to write better :)..thanks for joining me in my journey..someday I will publish them all when I reach 100.


lecker and yummy recipes said...
Wednesday, October 13, 2010

beautiful...just beautiful poem......long time i read any poems...and will continue to read them here...


Anonymous said...
Wednesday, October 13, 2010

brilliant, and tough foursome.

trisha
mydomainpvt.wordpress.com


Anonymous said...
Sunday, October 17, 2010

Loved your attitude!


Giovanni said...
Monday, October 18, 2010

Wonderful job, I'll have to try using acrostics myself. Lovely music.


Blaga said...
Monday, October 18, 2010

Lovely game of words ... and the music "River flows in you" my favorite!


2zpoint said...
Monday, October 18, 2010

working within those parameters is a monumental accomplishment and a testament to what you are saying. Great job!


Olivia said...
Tuesday, October 19, 2010

Very beautiful and creative!! Glad I stopped by to read this.. wonderfully woven words..:D

Happy Potluck xox
http://oliviasmindlymatters.wordpress.com/2010/10/16/sinfully-me/


Julia Smith said...
Tuesday, October 19, 2010

Definitely enjoyed the multiple layers of your pieces, Umamaheswari. Crazily accomplished.


abthomas said...
Tuesday, October 19, 2010

Splendidly creative, thanks for the great read1


umapoems said...
Thursday, October 21, 2010

@all-Thanks for commenting..I too love this poem very much


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