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Thursday 8 September 2011

Haiku - Hidden



Eyes dry and exhaust
I still work to uncover
My Hidden Triumph

An Yearning !

Untold grief, Oh!Mom
If only I could wipe out 
Your Hidden Tears


Prompt: 'Hidden' for Haiku Heights ...

5 comments:

  1. If only!

    This clings at the strings of my heart.

    Nicely written emotional piece!

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  2. Loved both...we can triumph as long as we keep the flame alive....and the second gave wings to my own desire.

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  3. uncovering triumph? ah.. if only it weren't hidden always.. bt it will come for sure :)

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